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That hurt me to watch. Ninety percent text isn't a movie, I am afraid. If you want to couple it with images it is good, if you can't draw, don't submit entries. Learn to draw, and learn about complimentary colors because I could barely read the text that you had there. The sound was annoying as all fuck, too, man. The goddamned dragon squeal should have atleast had a dramatic sequence with it to outweigh the annoyance of the high pitched ringing, but alas, all it had was a poorly drawn silhouette which was supposedly blown up with a red thing in a blinding flash. Cute, that, the flash, I mean... a good way to avoid drawing characters... "Ooooh, I can't see!" spare us, man, spare us. Hopefully you build your drawing skills, because the story line sounds good. I was actually anticipating some fine cinematics when I read your story. Keep in mind to make your text more visible (brighter against a dark background and darker against a bright background) and to have less text and more pretty pictures. Keep workin' on it, man.
Welp, im usually one who can take a critic's remarks with a grain of salt but due to the complicated and unstable response you left for my entry I have only a couple of comments for you:
1. There are two ways to spell critic, the forementioned and cri-Dick.
2. You totally have a right to say whatever you want on here but consider the following, there are no rules on here, I could display a cartoon dick going behind an ass (been done), is that the content you want on here?? Well this movie isnt anywheres near the best or the middle of the road, but it is one hell of a lot more creative and entertaining(even comic-wise) than some of the stuff that deserves a piss poor review. Thanks for the review but next time think about what your writing, it works better that way.
I'd like to see more, but...
I cracked up when I heard the Godzilla sound effect for the dragon.. Consider using something else.. Heh
Nice concept though.
The music was cool, but the actual movie... It was empty and incomplete and the animation was bumpy.
I don't know. It's just didn't do it to me.
Oh, wrong one...
I thought this was going to be something to do with the game Dragonseeds...
nice graphics though... good godzilla sounds
This is a very clever plot line.. It seems like an opening for a RPG.. Someone call prokion, this NEEDS to be a game.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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