The art could use some refining and the VA sounded like he (you?) had a stuffy/plugged nose.
Only the latter was really an issue and it still worked to get your point across however.
If early access/crowd-funding has taught us anything, it's that people are gullible and douche bags will prey on that market . I can't completely bash this sort of platform for game dev as for every million early access zombie survival and failed retro reboot/homage we get things like shovel knight and Freedom planet.