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I decided to animate the full intro to one of the greatest web review shows of all time.
Music by Kyle Justin
I don't know whats with the low ratings, I personally thought it was pretty good.
Now for my own joke lyrics.
This is all I have so far:
He's gonna fuck you all up the ass!
And play some shitty games from past!
He'd rather have a buffalo take a diarrhea dump in his cock!
immediate bonus points for the subject material. for the most part it was drawn well enough, but there were times when things felt kinda empty (one object on screen, white background). you could have synced the video better with the song in certain parts (e.g. "atari sega nerd", the genesis should have popped in as he said "sega".)
words in music videos are kind of a no-no. it's kinda like the rule in writing, "show, don't tell". when you write out "angry" and "nerd" it seems kinda lazy.
your perspectives were also off. the most eye grabbing scene i can think of is at 1:40. when he kicks the cartridge, it looks like his leg is sideways. this is mainly because of the shape of his foot.
but overall, knit picking aside, you did a good job. your actual errors were primarily in perspective. i can tell you worked hard on this.
Thank you for the critique and positive words. I'll keep what you said about perspective in mind while working on my next animation.
Nice work man. I used to love that show.
You should really take the time to practice drawing, I can appreciate some of the effort you put in, but the sub par drawings bring it down a notch or two
specifically in the human drawings.
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