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This is part one of a series, if you like it, I'll make more.
-Graphics- Not bad...
-Style- Pretty good; would on making the storyline make sence.
-Sound- Mic doesn't have that great of a quality.
-Violence- Not too much.
-Interactivity- just Play & Replay buttons.
-Humor- A little bit, but not much.
-+-Overall-+- This is pretty bad. The storyline doesn't make sence, and the mic you used doesn't sound that good... You need more Interactivity; maybe make a game. Put more blood & violence in it, but not too much. You're idea for the "DragonBall Z Characters in a PowerPuff Girl Style Animation" is pretty good, and don't talk into the mic from that close, maybe a few inches more away from it. It wasn't that funny, sice I couldn't understand them.
Thanks for your time,
I have a memory of really liking this when I was about nine, and I just found it again.
I'm never listening to my nine-year old self again.
MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE
all i have to say is one simple little thingy MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE MAKE MORE AND MAKE MORE
You better adjust the voice sound a bit...
Now I'm gonna sue you for money to pay up new speakers.
Welcome to the theatre of your mind, Dale
ANIME-Y HIGHSCHOOL STUPID OTAKU ADVENTURE ACTION EXPLOSIONS YAY
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