What a shit -_- Rockluki can do better

was better than the other, but without sounds again?

So where we start. This movie is really not bad. You improved since your Base movie. But still there are many things to improve, if you want to be strong animator. First of all: The music- Pendulum is my favorite and i dont have any offence to them. But Using this song in your movie is not original so much. Let me describe you what i mean. Pendulum is very famous. Almost everybody heard their songs so many times everywhere. In movies it was used so many times. I want to hear something new in movies. Thats make movie original. But dont take it as offence. It is just my personal opinion. About sounds I cant say you anything because You didnt add any of them. Thats really sad man. Watcher cant empatize to movie. About animation itself. As i said You improved, but still try to improve your smoothness. Make some movements slower. Like some movements with weapons or reloading, punches etc. Weapons are heavy dont forget it. Physics- I like the bullet shells animation. But what I really dont like is falling of the bodies. it is too fast and rough. Try to make it fluider. watch this video how Dela were animating fallin and movements. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-mllKwOL0hQ and try to use your imagination. how would you fall when you got hit to you face. Same is when the enemy got hit from the front. He would probably fall back not front. About violence. it is not bad but you dont use any blood splashes from hitted bodies or blood splats on the walls or floor when body got hit from the gun. and Still my movies are more violent :P Plot is very simple. we dont know the reason why he was in Dungeon etc. And the enemies looks like No challenge for protagonist. they looks weak and dumb. That were the bad things. They were many i know but i really want you to be stronger, because you have potentional to be strong. Just train more and harder. try to examine others stronger animators. their styles and try to improve to their level (or stronger level) I really like that you are original. you use your own sprites, your own names. i like that you are trying to work on yourself and do solomovies not collab parts. many beginning animators want to join many collabs but their skills are not good enough for them. that why collab became boring,repetitive and weak. Everybody should get certain level of his animation skills first and after that they could join the collabs. that is what I praise on you. So as I said this movie is not bad but still there are many things to improve. Dont take this review negative. I just tried to give you constructive critism and tips to motivate you to be stronger. :)
-Ellvis

Well fuck, You actually did kinda good on this one!

it has really awesome. :D

ps: can i have these sprites please?