Notbad
Well notbad of a movie it's been awhile since I seen anything like this and have forgotten how good this really was back in the day but anyways good story you presented and you added some nice humor to this whole piece I was pretty impressed with this as a whole and don't seen any need for ant changes at this time
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned it's pretty solid and no need for any changes at this time
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