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Sometime a mummy and a daddy love each other very much
That sound. THAT FUCKIN' SOUND!
It's fine to take a "semi-normal" situation, like a dinner date, and run completely sideways with it. Don't get me wrong, I think we've all been there at one point or another. Yet, this... Um... Frankly, this seriously needs work. It's choppy (to say the least) and it lacks enough effort to actually make a fluid transfer from the "date" portion to the "bedroom" situation... And while I can understand what you wanted to "say" with this thing... I can't in good conscience give you better marks for being able to actually say it. Keep working, and either you'll find what you want with the art of animation, or you'll decide it simply isn't your thing in the first place.
I really don't know what to tell you either way, but... you just have to muddle your way through the world a lot like the rest of us.
Nice try, but please... PLEASE... try a little more next time.
I really appreciate you taking the time to write this. I'm shit, but that's fine. I'm pretty new to this whole thing and I'm just making little things like this to try and get the hang of it. I thought I may as well post them. Honestly you're right, I didn't put that much effort into this, but I can promise I'll work much harder on the next one. I'd love to hear your opinion when I put it out.
the date appears to have gone quite well if you ask me
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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