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It's a strange new world in the next iteration of the Smash Bros series, and our favorite FZero pilot isn't handling it well.
Animations need a bit of work, the characters look a bit too 2-dimensional.
Jokes were ok, not really something for my taste, but decent enough for a chuckle.
Great voice-acting for most of the time. The sound-effects on the other hand need a bit more tweaking and some background music to emphasize the dialog and jokes may work wonder.
Keep it up!
Thanks for the feedback! I'm still very much an amateur, so I'll definitely keep working on the animations. And you're right, it was funnier in my head, but I went ahead and finished it anyway.
It's extremely cool that you liked the voice acting, that is a massive confidence boost.
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