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Hello everyone. As I promised, here is the translated version of my original animation. I hope you enjoy it!
Not bad, but it can improve a lot:
Steps and shoting are too slow and pretty rough, making it a little unpleasant to see
Sudenly appearing on opened doors it's weird, instead place the characters behind the door while opning it, so the characters actually go through the door and not just teleporting
Constant talking doesn't match the madness style very well, especially the "You're okay?", it just doesn't match madness
Sudden scene changes are just no good, it dissorients the viewer about what's happening, if you want to change the scene at least put a 1 second black trasition
and also don't make the characters stay totally still, make then slightly move something, the head, a hand, a foot, someting so the don't look like frozen in time
Good animation.. but everybody walks slowly.
Yep, I need to doing more fps.
he rescues his friends amd leaves .... like this tho
Nice try.. :D
nothing modern about it
Ok. Thanks for the 0 stars. Sure you first animation was very good.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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