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Modern Madness (English)

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rated 3.73 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Action
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madness
modern
english
traitor

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Uploaded
Sep 10, 2014 | 7:29 PM EDT

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Author Comments

Hello everyone. As I promised, here is the translated version of my original animation. I hope you enjoy it!

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Kurokami11Kurokami11

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Not bad, but it can improve a lot:
Steps and shoting are too slow and pretty rough, making it a little unpleasant to see
Sudenly appearing on opened doors it's weird, instead place the characters behind the door while opning it, so the characters actually go through the door and not just teleporting
Constant talking doesn't match the madness style very well, especially the "You're okay?", it just doesn't match madness
Sudden scene changes are just no good, it dissorients the viewer about what's happening, if you want to change the scene at least put a 1 second black trasition
and also don't make the characters stay totally still, make then slightly move something, the head, a hand, a foot, someting so the don't look like frozen in time



loperoz1loperoz1

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good animation.. but everybody walks slowly.


Paspartan1 responds:

Yep, I need to doing more fps.


xX-touurent-XxxX-touurent-Xx

Rated 5 / 5 stars

he rescues his friends amd leaves .... like this tho


Paspartan1 responds:

Thanks!


DjjanerDjjaner

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Nice try.. :D


Paspartan1 responds:

Thanks!


GabrielBarschGabrielBarsch

Rated 0 / 5 stars

nothing modern about it


Paspartan1 responds:

Ok. Thanks for the 0 stars. Sure you first animation was very good.