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rated 3.15 / 5 stars
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Genre:
Drama
Tags:
life
no
dreams
depression

Credits & Info

Uploaded
Sep 3, 2014 | 8:41 AM EDT

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Author Comments

Hey guys I hope you enjoy my second upload to Newgrounds!
This is a short story about never saying "No." to your dreams and things you've got in your head, even when everyone tells you to throw the towel :)
If you enjoyed, please make sure to rate my animation and sharing it ^_^ It really helps me to continue making stuff and getting better and better!

The music was made NOTE BY NOTE by a pianist friend of mine ^_^

Thank you very muuch! :3

Reviews


MewieMewie

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Love the message. Thoughtful. Looking forward to better animations but hey, great start for a 2nd upload :) Keep up the good work.


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Dalas responds:

Thank you Mewie! Ill try to get better :D


SummerOlivesSummerOlives

Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad for your second submission. The animation is very simple, and the plotline isn't anything I haven't seen before. However, the added lighting and tiny bloom likes effects were pretty nice. If there's anything you need to improve on, it would have to be to try to expand on the gestures alittle more namely because its kind of hard to assume what the character was going through with his stiff movements. Music was also nice, so overall good job!


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Dalas responds:

Thank you very much for your review SummerOlives!!
Ill try to improve on my works asap ^^
Thanks!


DergasDergas

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Goodjob Dude! You can work on choosing a melody that in a better way outlines the emotions of the scenes. Maybe some more story to tell. Play more with colors. Idk but you're on the right track!


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Dalas responds:

Thanks for your comment Dergas!! :D Ill try to get always better ^_^
Cheers!


catnip513catnip513

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Nice animation.


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Dalas responds:

Thanks mate ^^ don't forget to share!