i love the light effect and the story.

The animation and the detailed storyline was very well done, the voices of ditzy and derpy were also spot on, I do notice the brown horse's voice was kinda off, he sounded like he had trouble expressing his character and rushed through it rather than express it as a character would. other than that, it was very well done~

The "Michael Bay of Pony Fan Animations".

It looks pretty, but it lacks structure in it's story and expresses it's exposition terribly.

It jumps around allot, and only slightly expresses the plot.

Voice syncing and acting wasn't the best.

And it seems like allot of pretty visuals that were strung together without much consideration as to how relevant it would seem to the story.

It looks pretty, but it has allot of flaws.

I wouldn't mind you taking more time to edit this.

Add more exposition. Princess Celestia's betrayal is only touched ever so slightly.

The theme and message is nice but it falters without a good well structured story to back it up.

I know its been said multiple times but the audio... I want to like it for what it is but the audio hurts the score.

i think you've put way to much effort and time into making this to keep the audio like this. its really effecting the score and all. but it really is quite unenjoyable to watch like this at all.
i hope you can fix the audio soon