Bro that was cool like I loved the end and the whole thing was funny
The Battle for the Crown
Young students find themselves in the struggle to become the king of the hill.
This is my second short animated story. This is also my submission to this year's NATA. Please give as much critizism and sudjestions as needed.
i like it, quite a lot actually. i had to stop it about a minute before it was finished because of the sound quality (but you already know about that i'm sure. I have been browsing your work and the thing that stands out to me is you seem not to have lost the true essence of youth. the fact that this has no music actually made me think about the games my friends and i would play as a child. the only thing i might add (were i a creator) would be some backround type noises as the constant shifts in volume (none to full) are pretty distracting. 4 stars and all my 5 are belong to you my friend
I liked the animation but sound quality gave me a head ache. 3 1/2 stars since its ur 2nd flash.
i saw some nice animation in there, however line quality was all over the place. the characters would be drawn smoothly and neatly and then in some shots they would suddenly be very sketchy looking. The audio also could use some work but overall i think you have a lot of potential to be really great and goodluck in the tourny
I think even at 128 kbs it shouldnt sound this bad, the problem is in the recording maybe?
The character concepts are nice, art has its style, base story is ok but timing could be better. You could capitalize on the funny character concepts a bit more, that alone would carry the whole animation on its back, after the sounds are fixed that is.
Still ok for a first entry and a compo one too.
