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Note; This is a kinetic novel, so there's no actual gameplay. Simply click your mouse to progress through the story.

Headphones + high volume + dimmed lights is recommended.

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This is a kinetic visual novel based on the London 7/7 bombings, from the perspective of home grown terrorist Germaine Lindsay.

The story uses a few creative licenses, such as the change of weather and obviously the semi-spiritual sequence at the end.

I actually wrote this story for an assignment back in high school. It got a pretty good mark so I thought it'd be cool to add some visual and audio elements to it.

Thanks,
Jack.

Reviews


SimonJesterSimonJester

Rated 1 / 5 stars 22 hours ago

I think this would have been better had it been a Choose Your Own Adventure with multiple "correct" endings, as well as "incorrect" ones.

For example, I think that on one path of choices Lindsay could have discovered that Visor Consultants were running emergency response drills at the exact same times, at the exact same locations, with the exact same scenarios; and the probability of this being an actual coincident would be 1 in 3.7 x 10(48th power), which is more than all the grains of sand in the entire world.

Just a thought.



kirencekirence

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 12, 2014

hmmm...it is great game



Dude678Dude678

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 23, 2014

Wow. This is amazing. Great job.


08jackt responds:

Thank you :)


1sky1heart1sky1heart

Rated 5 / 5 stars May 22, 2014

Mixing Mad-World and the sound of rain was very reflective and sets the background for the story really well. This is the UK, rain, gray and cold, and often a very insular culture.
This is well done; the placing it in the Adventure category is appropriate, I don't think all Adventure games have to be interactive.
At the end, and even as I write this review, I am left feeling sad. Not because of the protagonists experience and fate, but for what kind of world we have made as the result of not caring about and loving each other. And it's such a small world, and we can do oh, so much better.
Thanks for sharing your work with us at NG.


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08jackt responds:

Thank you for the kind words


DoctorStrongbadDoctorStrongbad

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars May 22, 2014

Too long and drawn out. Keep writing, practice makes perfect.
The medal works, and I earned it.


08jackt responds:

Okay, thanks for the feedback.