Not too bad. The graphics aren't the smoothest, but that's not a huge issue. The writing is about average. However, I think some improvements in the acting and/or recording equipment could help bring out a bit more humor.
Author Comments
This is the first in a series of cartoons I've been planning to do for awhile about a character called "Emo Kid" and his grandpa. In this episode, Emo Kid watches television with his grandpa as his grandpa pervs over girls far too young for him.
dogsinthecathouse responds:
Thanks for the feedback. I'll definitely have to work on improving audio quality in future animations.
haha kinda creepy.
It's alright.
Grandpa's voice acting was awful to listen to... Horrible!
The god damn audio gets too high pitched at some points.
The emo kid also didn't have much of a role, it was basically just grandpa talking alone and grumbling and all that.
dogsinthecathouse responds:
When you say the audio gets too "high pitched" are you referring to Grandpa's voice getting too high pitched? Or are you referring to volume and general sound quality, because I know I should probably try to improve that in future animations...
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2.94 / 5.00
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