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Sep 9, 2013 | 4:37 PM EDT

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I've been "playing" in FL studio,and I've made this "song" which is playing in background..After listening it over and over again,this idea came across,so I've decided to make small animation about it...Probaby,I'll use this as a beginning for a animation I've been planning to make,or as a intro for animated series,if it evolves into few episodes.It will be about mentally disordered peasant,who is living alone on a distant farm in some parallel universe.

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ShiroineShiroine

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars September 9, 2013

I'm sorry but what I see here is just a 5-10 second animation with a very simple FL Loop. I have no control over the movie and not even a play button. It get's really annoying since it repeats so much and you should equalize your audio. Expand your movie, widen your music and learn more about animation.

0.5/5 - Try harder. This ain't going to make it pass NG especially with it's new Vote system.


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luka1991 responds:

Well,I didn't say that this is something mindblowing,nor that I have some special skills in FL,which can be seen in my author comment so as part about animation...There is no play button,because it is done in toonboom,not in flash,and in toonboom you don't have that option...And yeah,unfortunately,it did pass NG's new vote system.


TheRealBradTheRealBrad

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars September 9, 2013

I like your song, but the animation is lacking something. And without a story of any kind, this really has no place in the Movies section. You should re-submit into the Audio Portal if you desire, but it shouldn't stay up where it is.

I can't wait to see what you use the song for; I always love seeing new series. :)

-Brad
@mrbradleyp



SirAcquiesceSirAcquiesce

Rated 2 / 5 stars September 9, 2013

I love the dead chicken Im not sure how one falls on a fence and loses it's head but I think it's funny. The repeating black sun rising is kinda boring and wish there was more to it... a movie in my opinion has a start a middle and an end to be a good movie. One that just repeats the same thing in an endless loop leaves you wanting more.


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luka1991 responds:

I agree with you about some things you've said,so I've updated description,so you can see what is this about...


MonochromeMonitorMonochromeMonitor

Rated 2 / 5 stars September 9, 2013

Shows promise, but experimental films don't really belong here. It's very stranfe, though original. My number 1 concern is it's E For Everyone Rating, this should at least be Teen for the gore element.