The effort and time you put into your animations is unreal. A few seconds under 18 minutes after a few submissions is unheard of so great job on that. You have a lot of potential and I think that program is limiting your potential and is not worth the challenge because it can hurt your future growth as an artist and animator.
Animation: Improved slightly from your last video and liked the emotion put in there for the characters.
Audio: Also improved slightly from your last video.
Story: Pervert Jones! It was good to see him show up but the concept was good and the music fit in nicely with the scenes.
Tips for improvement:
- You like a challenge? Use Flash, After Effects, and/or Photoshop. These programs are standard in the industry, extremely powerful, will cut down the amount of time you spend on your animations, and will show a dramatic improvement in the smoothness of your animations and quality of work. Master these programs!
- The audio has too much static so you'll need a nice USB mic and use a program like Adobe Audition to filter our any noise.
- The conversations need to be more fluid and I think correcting the static will also help with that because now when the static stops it goes completely silent and it makes the pause between people talking seem longer than it actually is.
- Don't worry too much about some of the art being out of proportion. Even the animators of Family Guy have to send their work to Japanese animators to correct.
I know you can easily make these corrections, lets make it happen!