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This is pre-alpha so a lot of things will change in the final product! have fun and tell me what you think of it+Ideas and stuff I should fix or add!

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fcuking good, ive mastered the physics. My speedrun is 2 seconds

Hear are some ideas for you

-Music
People can get bored by listening to nothing probably a nice music.

-Better information
All you said was use a,s,d,and w to move but the w does nothing say space button to jump

-a story line
A good game always have a completely random or a real story make us laugh like a story about ducks taking over the world or even a love story

-enemies
It depends on what game you're making what is this game going to be about that's why a story is there to help players like us to understand the game

-maybe a menu
do i even have to explain

-secrets
players like us love challenges sometimes but don't make them too impossible to get. maybe give us hints or even a Easter egg can make this better

-2 stars
This game is like slow motion for me and it's not really fun but i know you can finish this game if you try your best

Is this helpful?

i say good luck to you in the future
:D

gerixgames responds:

Thanks that is helpful

Pretty nice game :D
It would be nice if it had a story :3

It was alright, but it doesnt bring anything new to the table. I know this is just a pre-alpha game, but there are probably millions of 2-d platformers out there. You should spice thing up a bit, for example multiple paths and secret exits that lead to undiscover territorries, or hidden platforms that are very difficult to see, based on how many secret paths you take, different rewards could be unlocked. This is only a sugjestion. I am looking foward to see how this turns out.

This should really be on your dumping grounds, not up for a full submit. First of all, jump isn't W as you have listed. Honestly, it just feels like every other platforming game out there. You need something to make it stand out and make it fun. As is, it's just dull and boring. Good luck.

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