I think you should slow it down just a bit. Also this could be a bit longer.
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
The preview of a couple of 2 brave dots go on a adventure for the hand... -= They call hand's arms=-
I think you should slow it down just a bit. Also this could be a bit longer.
Pretty good, but the text is a little to small.