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i made this for a friend of mine on deviantart,i'm still working on it.
The parts with the Hedgehog where poorly animated. But the parts with Jacob where alright, I actually know him from deviantart.
It's a good start but it needs ALLOT of work. I would love to see a bigger stage and please the color for the chat box is frustrating as all hell!
not very good graphics, no humor and it didn't seem to have much of a plot... try again
You really shouldn't upload flash WIPs that don't function properly, let alone WIPs in general, but that's ok.
A little critique:
The dialogue could use a good bit of fine-tuning and the pace slowed down a notch or two. I found the text a little wonky with the way it'd go behind the character icons, so that too could be worked on.
I hope when you're finished your friend (and others) enjoy your flash!
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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