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Rated E - Everyone
No rude reviews plz,i'm just getting started.Thank you.
It doesn't have much purpose, just running and jumping, in the same small area with no variety, so that lost you two stars. However, the graphics are really good, and the controls run smoothly, smoother than on other popular games, so this experiment does have potential. I also like how you added the profiler and full screen mode by right clicking, though honestly I don't see the purpose of the profiler! Add some more to this game, maybe some enemies, a fight capability, definitely more areas, and just an overall purpose, and you'll be looking at four-star and five-star reviews!
this is the test game insert in Stencyl demostration, this is your works either!
Four jumps to make it to the end of the game is not "awesome". It is pointless and boring and why even bother to make the character a robot? It may as well have been a dot.
Well, it works. Kinda. There's only one level, if that's to be considered a level. There's no real end, so it makes it a pointless submission. It seems like it's straight out of a tutorial, except without the end added. Please don't submit anything that comes out of a Stencyl tutorial.
If you want feedback and tips, that's fine, but this isn't the best place for this. The Portal is for finished items. The Forums are what you want. Load this into your Dumping Grounds. It's the third icon from the left at the very top of the page when you're signed in. It looks like a bucket with an arrow pointing down. Once it's loaded there, copy and paste the link into the Forums (Community>Forums). That way, people see it and give tips, which is what you want, but it's not in the Portal, filling your account with low scores or blams, which you don't want.
Good luck! :)
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