I am looking forward to the final finished version of this. While fast paced the animation has potential and can easily be spun into something entertaining even for a test it did demonstrate solid artistic value

This is a very good flash test. But it's not a pretty good finished product.

As a flash, obviously it's not very good. Not really any plot or humour that makes this worth watching.

But as a flash test, nothing wrong at all! The animation is done well. For your next one, slow things down a bit. In this the clouds part, the camera pans down and Link walks out of a town, all in 2 seconds! Make that five seconds and we have something that people can watch without feeling sick.