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Mar 2, 2013 | 4:20 PM EST

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Hi I,m new to flash and this is my first animation so please only posative comments and Constructive criticism.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

This is a very good flash test. But it's not a pretty good finished product.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

As a flash, obviously it's not very good. Not really any plot or humour that makes this worth watching.

But as a flash test, nothing wrong at all! The animation is done well. For your next one, slow things down a bit. In this the clouds part, the camera pans down and Link walks out of a town, all in 2 seconds! Make that five seconds and we have something that people can watch without feeling sick.

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ItchyLemon responds:

Thanks for the feedback :)
I made this animation as a test to get to grips with flash. I will work on the timing and a plot for my animation.