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Hi I,m new to flash and this is my first animation so please only posative comments and Constructive criticism.
This is a very good flash test. But it's not a pretty good finished product.
As a flash, obviously it's not very good. Not really any plot or humour that makes this worth watching.
But as a flash test, nothing wrong at all! The animation is done well. For your next one, slow things down a bit. In this the clouds part, the camera pans down and Link walks out of a town, all in 2 seconds! Make that five seconds and we have something that people can watch without feeling sick.
Thanks for the feedback :)
I made this animation as a test to get to grips with flash. I will work on the timing and a plot for my animation.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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