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Chett Harker, a young man searching for something greater in life, begins an adventure with his friend Nate, a wise-cracking, energetic best friend. Together, they're going to begin a quest that was never even known to have existed.
Not bad, I liked the music in the beginning portions. there seemed to have been some throw backs to John Kricfalusi in some of the main characters facial expressions. I liked all the set pieces and little quirky characters.
I think the only bits I didn't like were the text that stated "footprints, someones been here before". I thought it was a little tacky and unnecessary...you are animating, after-all...and I feel that should've been conveyed through the medium. The voice acting was a little subpar and could be spruced up a bit (aside from the owl, that was alright).
I am a fan of John K.'s art, so that's a big compliment. Thanks! And I will try to get rid of those unnecessary text boxes next time. And yes, the voice acting does indeed need improvement. I will continue to work on it. Thanks again for the feedback :).
What an impressive story! Didn't read the author comments before watching, so the story arc really floored me. Most movies here are over and done with, within a minute (lol, premature entertainment). The more I watched, the more compelling and enjoyable it became. Action sequences and scene changes seemed fluid and natural.
Wanted to take half a star off for the way you drew people, but there's no reason to: you've improved character design and consistency, made faces more expressive.... even the clarity and quality of the audio kick butt (aside from one or two volume pops). Righteous stuff man.
Much appreciated sir. Thank you for the feedback :D. I do indeed need to work on characters and improve my art, and will certainly try to do so for the next part. Thank you for your continued support :).
A short film about a park bench
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