Not bad, I liked the music in the beginning portions. there seemed to have been some throw backs to John Kricfalusi in some of the main characters facial expressions. I liked all the set pieces and little quirky characters.

I think the only bits I didn't like were the text that stated "footprints, someones been here before". I thought it was a little tacky and unnecessary...you are animating, after-all...and I feel that should've been conveyed through the medium. The voice acting was a little subpar and could be spruced up a bit (aside from the owl, that was alright).

What an impressive story! Didn't read the author comments before watching, so the story arc really floored me. Most movies here are over and done with, within a minute (lol, premature entertainment). The more I watched, the more compelling and enjoyable it became. Action sequences and scene changes seemed fluid and natural.
Wanted to take half a star off for the way you drew people, but there's no reason to: you've improved character design and consistency, made faces more expressive.... even the clarity and quality of the audio kick butt (aside from one or two volume pops). Righteous stuff man.