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first real attempt at using flash, and decided to try my hand at a gamegrumps animation
episode this is from - http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=GVXp13lbj3A
This was very well done! The animation seem to fit the dialogue quite niceley. Good Job!
this is great. Actually very well drawn. Not bad at all for your first attmept at flash. Kudos on a replay button and pre loader.
Considering this is your first real attempt i'm going to give it a 2.5. the art style was pretty decent, and the animation was decent as well. My main issue is the lip syncing. some parts are in sync almost perfectly, but others have no lip animation whatsoever. The next thing is coloring, it would be nice to see fully colored animations from top to bottom. Backgrounds void of color and characters with no color kind of detracts from the point and makes it hard to tell one location from another. Overall though, keep at it and i think youll do just fine on your next submission.
I enjoyed this...wait no that's an understatement. I LOVED this. I cannot wait to see more work from you! :D
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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