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So I managed to finish this animation just before the world ended. Pretty nice timing if I do say so myself.
A huge HUGE thank you goes to the awesome voice actors who helped me out on this. You guys rock !
If you want to see part 1 of this here is the link: http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/596554
Such improvement! Wow, you're getting better so quickly! I wish I could improve at that rate. The walk cycles looked pretty good, and I particularly liked the looping orc animations. Especially the drum one! Wow. The lip syncing is also nice! The sound was good, except for a few times when I felt the music ended really abruptly (also, my microphone quality is clearly inferior to everyone else's). The jokes were pretty fun. There were still a few rough areas, and I would personally advise moving the camera around a little less often, but with the rate that you're improving, I'm expecting things to only get better.
Thanks for letting me be a part of this! Also, the ending seemed a little open... Are you leaving it ready for a possible Part 3 one day?
First of all I want to thank you again Alex for taking the time and helping me out on this episode as this was a lot bigger than the first one.
Second of all - Thanks for your detailed review Alex.
Well I always try to improve whatever I can but I still have a looong way to go in order to get where I want to be. The funny thing is that I actually thought that people would like the bowing orc most as I thought it came out the best as far as the smoothness of the animation - but I guess the drumming orc did steal the show as far as grabbing the attention of the eye.
I hope to improve on camera shots too, and also on the script - like I told you in other messages I do kind of write the script all in one go and rarely go back to fixing things, I have to fix that somehow - I also would love to try and talk to you and the other voice actors for help in improving the yet non-existing script for part 3.
So we've come to another point you touched in your review( well more of a question really) - Yes I do wish to make part 3 of this animation, actually I would love it if we could parody Gothic 2 as well as it is a really funny game with a lot more areas and characters to have fun with.
The improvement in your skill between the first one and the second one is definitely noticeable, although it is still clear that you have a bit to go (don't we all?), it's also clear that you're actually getting there.
Thanks for involving me!
This brings me back to simpler times when i was 12 playing gothic 1 thank you for bringing me back to some of the best times of my life!
Yeah - I also played this game when I was around 12-14 and I can imagine how you must feel. I am glad that the animation I made managed to bring you back to simpler times. Thanks for the comment.
Great job on the running animation! I can see improvements since the first one. Keep up the good work!
Hey Adam. Thank you for your review. I just want to thank you again for helping out on this episode. And may you have happy holidays !
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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