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Hello, this is my first animation downloaded here, unfortunately there are only 4 tests, I know that very few tests but try to please try to appreciate the animation worth, oh by the way I'm sorry that there is no music, and background
it is great
Your response to rapidsmilebomb conveys the idea that you didn't get the point of his review. What he met was why are you uploading such a short, pointless, sequence of about four tests. There is nothing wrong with showing your tests but the flash portal is not the right place for that. Besides, what do you think the ng dump is for? What you should have done was upload these tou you ng dump and posted links to each of them in a news post.
As for the tests themselves, rapidsmilebomb had it right with the statement that "you have a long way to go." You really need to work on easing because the movement of the charters was a bit stiff. Recoil would be another good thing to practice. When the character shoots a gun (especially a desert eagle), the recoil should be a lot stronger. Try to do only two frames of the gun going after being shot so it will seem like it has more of a kick. One thing that is important is not to use others' sprites without their permission like you did with delamortes' character. One last little tip would be to animate both feet on the same layer. This personally, makes feet a lot easier to work with and get a better result.
one last gripe i had with this flash would be the icon. This was never show in thsi flash nor did you make it. For the icon of your flash, make sure it depicts something from your actual movie and not another persons work.
Over all, one and a half stars because you have a while before you'll become good at madness animation, but keep on working on it.
wow, did not expect that someone would make such a great review of my animation, I thank you for the advice uchtu what you told me
I'd saw Sanford & Deimos do the CARAMELDANSEN!!!!!!!!!
Lol, maybe I'll do the animation on this topic
why bother uploading tests? You have a long way to go.
Well, these tests are, how-to test my skills animations, as I understand, you think that I need to start with a cartoon and not to test?
Your very good and i i've seen some great tests keep it up!! :D
thanks a lot dude ;)
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