Okay this is really short! and newgrounds is for FINISHED animation, if this is a finished animation it should'nt be on newgrounds, it should be in your portfolio as practise animation. And since you made it so short, could you not even have time to lip sync it right? :/
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A boy who would never give up because it just his still
There wasn't really a point to this, the tags don't make sense, and I didn't find it to have comedic value at all. Luckily it was short and ended where it should have for this, but next time try adding a little more to have it more worthwhile to watch. The animation was alright, but also try to work on the lip-sync a bit.
short and to the point.........keep working maybe add something to go off of on that give it some story
