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I REALLY want constructive criticism on this, It is my second serious flash. Please do good tips :D.
P.S. I dont know why, but it was funny when I wrote it down but isn't really funny now...
i will say that i liked it and it was funny but, some of the bad voice acting could have been cut out to shave some time off and and keep some ADHD people interested. the idea and jokes were funny but needed some quick decisive voice acting to deliver it better.
Constructive crit. THANK YOU.
No but yea... I could hear some dead spots in the audio
Pretty decent, pacing is a little slow...not sure if most people have the patience for longer jokes like what's here. I like the way you took advantage of the weird things that happen with Flash sometimes.
I gave 3 stars.
The Dino Crapping himself was funny, and the dirty humor was cool.
The mic is too sensitive and I could hear lips smacking when the dino's where talking which got on my nerves.
The animation could be smoothed out a bit and refined.
Not outright bad, but not quite amazing ether.
A better mic, up the art style a little bit and it could be quite cool.
Not bad, Not bad at all! The style was very rough in consistency and the voice acting was good in its natural best. I noticed (whether it was made on purpose or not) a few discrepancies in your short like your protagonist's eyes would fade in color and then transition into just outlines. I felt like I was watching a bunch of old DIC owned cartoons (Super Mario Bros. Super Show, Super Mario Bros. 3, Super Mario World, Street Fighter the Animated Series and Legend of Zelda television series) from the late 80's and early 90's. Even Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles from 87' to 96' suffered the same mistakes. Plus my mind nearly imploded at some of the logic, Good example where the hell did the dino kid get a pair of bluejeans before he took one scared released dump in them? Again my mind feels like its mindscrewed, again I don't know if you intentionally did this style on purpose or not but you did a good job and making me feel nostalgic again! Your humor although simple it proved very VERY effective. Simple humor is one out of many personal favorite forms of comedy that I admire. You did a good job friend! I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 in voting power. I really liked your sense of humor, You really did a number on me laughing some! Keep practicing, contributing and creating on here. I hoped you've enjoyed this review. Good day.
Love the idea of dino's!! Good job
A short film about a park bench
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