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This is the first animation that i made.The quality is not so good but that was the best i could make it :|.Most of the sounds are made by me and are not so good and there is a lot of screaming :D
First things first: Work on your sounds. When you "scream" into the mic, pull it away and don't try to hush your voice. The art is good for what it is and I'm certainly impressed that you submitted something with substance as a first animation (some people do, but it's so hard to find). Things are generally fluid and for a short, speculative animation it's well done.
3/5 to keep it alive.
I approach all animation reviews the same way Its always better than I can do myself.
But in this case I have to agree some of the others Its not great but it is soooo much better than most people do with several attempts. The animation isn't flawless but i'm not gonna be a douce and point out all the little minor mishaps. Very nice first video keep it up!
the art work could use some work...
needs better graphics :/ all i have to say
Impressive. I was put off by the inconsistencies in this, where the knight was injured, but the scars disappeared. The animation was done well, and the sound fit well. The action was great and I was thoroughly entertained.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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