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Sonic Unxpct Advent EP: 6

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Finally after long 3 years in college I am finally out of the prison! sorry for the delay people. Just to let new viewers know I'm not a Professional animation maker i just do it for entertainment. Depending on how many views i get on this episode I will make another 1,000 views should do the trick :P

BTW why cant I edit my last episodes!?

Episode 7 will be out after 1000 views! :)

Hope you enjoy and please be nice with the comments!

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this is madness madness this is spatrta spatrta remix starts playing

superhyperturbosonic responds:

hehe Im glad you liked it! Thank you for watching and giving me 4 and half stars!

Well you sure did the entertainment job for me?

superhyperturbosonic responds:

I'm glad you liked it :)

Well... it has been quite a while hasn't it? Haha, well I'll get right to it :P Glad to see you took my advice on the text font, looks good (though Knux's text is a bit hard to read, what with the red background and all), and the "advance text" buttons is a good idea, personally the speech bubbles lasted too long for me in the older episodes, and I know for other people it was too short, good to let everyone read at their own pace. Spelling nd punctuation (sorry I'm such a grammar nazi) have improved fairly, but a few glaring mistakes managed to creep in, try typing up your script in Word or something before actually animating the next one. Also, keep an eye out for those commas and apostrophes. Anyway, this one has a better choice of music, I note some classic Sonic references, good choice. Sound in general, though, isn't too much better, one sound effect in particular is getting overused to the point it's like "Oh, that sound again, cool, I guess?" which is that sort of powering-up-energy sound at the end when Shadow transforms using the Master Emerald. Also, when Tails's plane gets destroyed, there definitely should've been an effect with that, be it an explosion, or the classic damage sound from the Sonic games, just something. Sprites were nice and consistent, didn't shake around too much or anything and you had a good variety of backgrounds and sprites, I particularly liked the Master Emerald one (which game was that ripped from?). However, during the battles and stuff, the repeated cloud background looks way too uniform and regular, the clouds should be a bit more varied. Also Super Knux just seems uncharacteristically large, he's bigger than most everyone else to an almost ridiculous degree, he needs to be scaled down a bit. Also, the intro was neither interestingly cool, like the dark sonic one from the previous episode, nor funny. At this point, THIS IS SPARTA is so overused there's really nothing original to be done in it... However, to end this on a light note, I'm really liking where the story's going, getting really good :P looking forward to the next one, N00b out.

superhyperturbosonic responds:

Your the key to making my animations better! thanks again for a great review.

I'm not Nazo, I'm my original character Blazo!

superhyperturbosonic responds:

OK....?

Wasint that good... not really original.. cause of the sparta thing...

superhyperturbosonic responds:

Sparta thing is just a intro for my logo... I make new intros for every animation... il keep in mind people don't like it lol

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Aug 31, 2012
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