needs ambient or background music
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Generally Insane, Episode 2: That's Not a Tree
John, who is not the most sane man around, is invited to the Mayor's birthday party. All John wishes to do is invite the mayor over for dinner... at least the nice side of John.
Also he meets a tree named Maple.
It may take a bit to load, but don't worry, it's not frozen.
EDIT: Due to it's request, background music has been added (at least a little bit).
Eekium responds:
Fixed!
Heh heh...
I like the sense of humour you have and the animation was pretty good. The only thing I think you could do to make this cartoon better is by adding a bit more music to the video, for example when john goes psycho you could have some really dark ambient music playing or just some simple background music that would really set the mood. Other than that It was great and I can't wait to see what happens next episode.
Maybe this just isn't up my alley but I didn't find this funny, watched it all the way through though. Maybe someone else will, keep it.
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