Needs a LOT of polishing.
First, it has a lot of spelling errors, i noticed that i need to click on the screen once to get in control of the character, the jumping animation makes him/it rolls it´s eyes for no reason, in the second level toching the border of the map causes a death, stop throwing an ad every time the screen changes, the menu button should´n be bound to the beggining of the level, the second stage requires perfect landing on the enemies. The controls are good and smooth though.
Author Comments
This is a story about little boy who decided to help his friends! This game is under working! I will update it! And so one day, our hero decided to go on a journey, and then he come back he learns that his friends was stolen by the forces of evil. He decides to save his friends! If you find bug! Tell me about it! Known bugs: Animation bug Multiplayer will be in next version.
nikin777 responds:
Realy good review! I like people like you.
If you can tell mor about grammar mistakes. I am from Russia and just 14 years old.
Fun, not that good though.
Not bad
Please stop submitting bits and pieces of your game. Finishe the entire game, and THEN submit it.
nikin777 responds:
I need to hear people to know how can i make game better. I will update game at this post and dont create another. And its my first game i am in little nervous.
bugs i noticed: 1. he shakes back and forth when you stand still. 2. everytime i die it takes me to the newgrounds play button again. 3. he floats.
nikin777 responds:
Thanks for review! I will try to fix bugs.
You do know you can upload this file on the other submission so it updates...right?
Like, your filling the portal, with the same, uncomplete game.
nikin777 responds:
You are totally right! It's my mistake. If i can i will delite other versions.
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1.70 / 5.00
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