This made me smile. I'm a sap for stuff like this haha. I personally think that it could have had more color, but i do understand this is just a short animation. Hope to see more from you on the portal, you have great potential :)!

You're pretty skilled as an artist and your delivery is very good too ^^. You could work on your plot development a little though

The animation is more than a little rough (plus there's no colour, which detracts from this as well), and the replay button at the end hardly works at all. The movie itself is a very simple, but heartwarming, idea, though, so I believe this could be a cute short with some more time/effort put into it.