o ok

The one with sound was ALOT better.
The newgrounds one would be perfect if it had sound.
Good animation, like.

I will give you the "first movie" excuse for this, I think you should learn more tools in flash so it will be more easy to do accurate lines :P And your movie is about Minecraft so you need those straight lines, not some "curvy try lines"

Can definitely use some work on the quality of graphics, and sound would be nice, but you've certainly got potential. Nice detail, the RPG interface was cute and believably done. Keep it up! :-)

I've gotta say, It's pretty good for your first flash. I mean I've never made a video before but I'm pretty sure if I did it would come out like this, if not worst. The lack of sound is the main reason for the lower rating. Nice humor and pretty accurate depiction of greifing in minecraft. I hope to see more work from you, and it would be nice to see the evolution that takes place.