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TOME - Episode 04 - Fraggedquest

Gamecrazed, alone in the woods one day, is invited by Alpha and the others to join in a quest, so they can relax and enjoy TOME like regular players for the first time in a while...but their day of enjoyment is in danger of being blown apart by an old enemy, lookin' to stir up trouble. Our heroes split up into groups, seeking three pieces of a cursed statue that holds a monster inside it for them to fight against. The REAL monster might just turn out to be something else entirely! Can they triumph over EVIL!?

Created by Chris "Kirbopher" Niosi, with music by Weston "Kajetokun" Durant, featuring special guest voices of Deven Mack Jr. (Beyblade: Metal Masters) and Mick Lauer (Yu-Gi-Oh! ZeXal). Join the adventure in the Terrain of Magical Expertise!

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NeochildsNeochilds

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I have to say this is funnier than some cartoons I have seen on adult swim. This what a decent script and well thouht out Idea brings about. Great job. hahaah watching this just make me laugh at the dragon dude and his hero sounding self.



Mattguy77Mattguy77

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Thoust has touched thine heart, and can't wait for more comrade Kirbopher! For I am, NYLOCKE DRAGON OF WAITING WITH BATED BREATH~!!! Will continue to look forward to episode 5!


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spicy5spicy5

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I love this series and the good runtime, keep it up ;P



Alpha-NuvaAlpha-Nuva

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Showed an improvement from the last episode. Just quicken up the pacing at some points. I could see that you were trying to establish some backstory with the group's conversations while they waited for the moon to rise, but some of it really dragged on or was completely unnecessary. It would help if the writing was also a little less pretentious, although this was a big improvement over the last episode as well.



Twisted4000Twisted4000

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I see no improvement from this one compared to the previous episode. Audio is good, I like Kirbopher's voice especially when he's screaming (it just sounds well-acted and clean). The writing isn't so great BUT the dialogue is snappy during the battle scenes, which I like.

But again, it's the visuals that just kill everything for me. They just don't look good... there's no consistency with the line-work, the colors are all in muddy shades and have little harmony, the characters look extremely flat and out-of-proportion, it's the same deal every time... the frame-by-frame parts aren't amazing or anything, but they are pleasant to look at compared to all the tweening. Also the gradients still don't look good, they just don't make sense, they just destroy the laws of how color and physics works. They make objects look incredibly flat but they have this slow color-transitioning...? uh

But I really enjoyed the camera movement during the fights, I liked how it moved a lot and attempted to keep you interested. But it just doesn't entirely save the issues I am spotting with the rest of the graphics. I mean obviously it's the color scheme, that's usually the first thing that gets picked up with the eyes, but also the characters have certain portions and objects on them that look like they're in some completely different dimension compared to the others, like the arms are completely flat and just look like paper-overlays compared to the body, which looks like aAAAHAHhhh it's just so hard for me to describe all these problems, it's literally a mess. I mean sometimes I even see you used shadows in the drawings, but then other drawings in the same shot DON'T have shadows... I mean make up your mind, that completely destroys the spectrum of everything. Oh yeah, the anatomy is still screwed up.

Well that's all I have to say about this one. All the story problems persist and everything's still just so ugly-looking.