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May 25, 2012 | 6:35 PM EDT
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I know Newgrounds probably isn't the best place for this kind of thing, but I hope at least a small handful of people would be interested in seeing this.

Several years ago, like, a bunch of years, I did this little children's book. I never really did anything with it, it needed more work, more polish, etc. I never got around to it. I was backing up some files today and found it, since I'll never finish it I thought I'd compile it in a flash and show you guys. I'm a better writer, artist, everything now. This is dated work and it shows, but still. It was kinda cool finding it. Hope you guys dig, Newgrounds rocks! Etc. Stay cool.

-Hyp

EDIT---
Thanks so much for the kind words guys and support, and thanks to NG and Tom for Frontpaging this, holy smokes! It's really old work, but I'm really happy now that I shared it!

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ninjachucksninjachucks

Rated 5 / 5 stars

If i had a kid and this was a book i would bye it!!!



MartialArtistMartialArtist

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I demand more.


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Civilized-ApocalypseCivilized-Apocalypse

Rated 5 / 5 stars

the characters are very cute but i feel the writing needs more work. the idea seems good but something about the writing thats a little awkward from a few pages


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EZRZIZCZKZEZRZIZCZKZ

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow... now this is something really good.

When I first "opened" the file, I muted my music thinking this would have it's own, but nope.
It could really use some of it, and just by chance, I was listening to "Nocturne of Amestris -duet-" by Akira Senju, and it just felt so spot on combined with the story and the drawings, and then came "Crime and punishment" also by Senju just when the guys where facing the storm and feeling uneasy.
I think all this really helped with your work, so just pointing out the lack of music.
Now, about your drawings, they are very good, as all the work I know from you. Its "visible" how your technique evolved, and I just think thats amazing.
Also the story is very good, no matter if its for kids, I think you should try and do more stuff like that, you know, just to try different stuff.
To finish this, excellent work overall, art and story. Don't stop working like this, and keep it up, always up.


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SaviourOfTheUniverseSaviourOfTheUniverse

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Um... this actually rocks.
My niece will love this.


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