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This is my first animation, I hope yall enjoy.
So it's another superhero flash movie.
The entire movie was bland in every meaning of the word. I have nothing against flash movies about superheroes, and actually enjoy them when done right. Sadly, this wasn't done right. Every second of the movie felt generic, and the humor felt forced.
The movie begins with the typical opening theme you'd expect. Nothing new or interesting that differentiates it from the others. That would be fine if the art style was more consistent. This could be fixed by giving "The Animator's Survival Kit" a read or at least observing the animation in cartoons frame-by-frame.
Decent coloring is needed in cartoons. Harmony needs to be there, or the cartoon will eventually devolve into a cesspool of awkward, all-over-the-place colors. Everything about the people looks generic. I'd suggest smoothing the lines out manually since you used the brush tool, and choosing more vibrant colors - y'know, colors that stand out.
The humor felt pretty forced. It was pretty much one poor, predictable joke. As soon as I saw the title, I knew an obvious joke would be made that would take advantage of this. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing, if well-executed.
I honestly cannot imagine this type of series lasting for more than one episodes. You already milked the one joke you could make with this synopsis, so anything else would feel forced and unoriginal.
Also, the fbf explosion looked pretty bad. If you left it on-screen for one second or two and then had it minimize, it'd be okay, but looking at jittery redrawings of frames that were already okay on their own for more than two seconds is just horrible.
I'm sorry if I come off as harsh, but I hope you take this review into consideration and improve for future animations. You have potential, you really do. Timing and pacing was already decent, despite the fact that the opening and closing theme combined were longer than the actual episode, so all you need is a solid concept!
The best thing about this is the songs, very catchy and funny. Otherwise it was okay, fairly decent animation. Not a bad job.
Its not the worst thing ive ever seen and its still crap if that tells you anything. and you honestly put episode one? That implies that there will be more than one episode. Please do me... US on newgrounds a favor.. Dont put a number two up because in order to accuratley review you have to watch the FULL movie.. and its torture bro.
Thanks Boosterbeasy! We All have to start somewhere.
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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