Good animation, if you had some better programs other then MS Paint, it would be even better.

Amusing Flash movie here

So here is something I have not seen in a long while, but must start off with this being just alright, the whole "MS-PAINT" style is ok but there can be alot more opertunities, with more better programs, So thats something you should look into if you are going to improve. ms paint hinders on the graphics and detail you can put in,, Now i did think the "VOICES" were pretty good, came it well and showed off some good quality about things, I also like how you presented some "HUMOR" in this and that made it much more entertaining for me, The "ANIMATION" was actually notbad but seemed it could use some more smooth and more flowing action about it, so in the end this was actually notbad with the strong points being the humor and the voices, while the weak points being art program, and possibly a little in the animation areas, but all this can be worked out with effort, time, and even better tools, and ofcourse some practice aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as suggested a better program to start off wouldnt hurt, Ms paint is ok but if you want to improve you should learn with other ones aswell, also mentioned that the animation could use more flow and more smoothness to it, So as stated above more practice, more improved tools, and more effort overall.

Well, the anitmations are a bit lacking here, but considering that you didn't do this in flash, this isn't too surprising.

The graphics are all right. Paint might not be the best programm to create decent images, but what I could see here was all right.

The voice acting is pretty good. The office worker sounds pretty good and Batman has a very nice voice as well.

Overall, this movie shows that you have a lot of potential. Now you only need some better tools, and I'm sure you are able to create some very good flash movies.

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It seemed like an interesting idea on it's own, but it was rather short, which took away from the humor a bit.

Animation - It was alright, certainly better than a lot I've seen in my time on this website, but you could have made it feel a little less stale, and more realistic than you did. Even just having the characters move around more, and feel more lively would have been a major improvement here.

Voice - The voice of each character was alright, batman's being the most humorous for obvious reasons. I enjoyed the censor bleep because I find words are funnier when they are censored. Other than this, I can't really find anything worth discussing.

Humor - It didn't make me laugh, honestly. This section could have been more easily improved by adding more lines, and therein more to the animation overall.

Overall - It is an alright animation. I wouldn't give it a prize or anything, but it is obvious you have potential. Keep it up.

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This seemed to be rather humorous at least. It starts out with Batman stating he protects people and there is almost always teh chance the people are saved. Then it cuts to showing its just a guy pretending to be Batman and doing a deep voice and all to sound heroic.

The animating seemed alright for a mixture of MS paint and Sony Vegas. I would really consider getting flash though so you can do all of the animating in one program rather than drawing stuff in MS paint and then transferring it over to Sony Vegas. Drawing skills are good but can be even better with practice.

The voice acting was good. What did you do for the deep sounding Batman voice? The office employee sounding unamused was also good to hear. Then there was background sounds at the office and people speaking along with the dramatic music for when Batman was doing his speech.

Overall, entertaining.

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