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Flash is a pain in the arse!
The flash/animation part was really good, clean, nicely done. But the audio quality was terrible. I could barely tell what you were saying most of the time. Work on that, otherwise its pretty good.
It was alright, even funny, but it would have been alot funnier and thus better if what she was sayin wasn't so unintelligible most of the time. Still, to say that flash is a "pain in the arse" (lol) the animation was good, so well done :-)
Animation was good (loved the facial expressions), sound effects were good too, only thing I see needs an improvement is the dubbing/voice acting. It sounded really echoy and it was hard to understand. Also, the pacing was slow. Decent effort overall.
Could have been really funny. This needs background music. Voices need to be cleared up. it was hard to hear. Great concept though. I know what it's like waiting for an application to not get accepted. If you fix those problems, this would have been hilarious. Good try
It's time for Rifftrax...
Detective Nwar and his partner Blanche might as well investigate a water crisis.
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