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I saved these works at every step, to show the process of making them.
Finally decided to upload it to newgrounds.
I also decided to use the games factory 2 because it's free.
Update: The second one had a few weird frames. Corrected.
I like the concept and the atmposphere of this flash. You're art is nice and i'm not enough of an artist to give you any advice on that. However a problem that i can point out is that the song restarts whenever you transition to a new part of the flash. It'd be much better if the music remained playing through on a single loop wherever you were on the flash and never restarted unless finished. I also think a few more inbetween frames of your process would be nice, and also a few more pieces of artwork. For a first flash it's decent, good luck with future stuff!
Your pointers are absolutely right.
The music restarting at every frame sort of bugged me too, and I'm looking for a way to make it better on my next flash.
I'll try getting more frames for the next one too, with more descriptions on what I did at every step.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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