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nothing to spectacular but i need some feedback anyways you think this could be improved please don't hesitate to say :3
I just don't think I liked it. If it had voice acting and SLIGHTLY better graphics, I would've accepted it.
I think this deserves more than a 2 star rating, the editing isn't bad, it just seems abit disjointed overall. Maybe having some sort of intro screen or setup scene, would have been cool. I didn't get the merchant thing at the end as I couldn't read the text. Also ripping graphics probably isn't the best way to go as it makes you look cheap. Anyway just my opinion.
was very n00bish, line work and character designs and animation all need more work and detail yo
well you have to work in the fonts there the conversation is barely visible,anyways not bad just need more work.
I am sure you tried to put a lot of effort into this video but it is horrible. I don't want to sound too rude, but didn't quite understand any concept as to what it was about (no storyline) yet it is called "Tonic"... let your imagination run a bit more next time, and allow for smoother animation & a plot.
A short film about a park bench
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