nothing to spectacular but i need some feedback anyways you think this could be improved please don't hesitate to say :3
I think this deserves more than a 2 star rating, the editing isn't bad, it just seems abit disjointed overall. Maybe having some sort of intro screen or setup scene, would have been cool. I didn't get the merchant thing at the end as I couldn't read the text. Also ripping graphics probably isn't the best way to go as it makes you look cheap. Anyway just my opinion.
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was very n00bish, line work and character designs and animation all need more work and detail yo
I will try harder next time
well you have to work in the fonts there the conversation is barely visible,anyways not bad just need more work.
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I am sure you tried to put a lot of effort into this video but it is horrible. I don't want to sound too rude, but didn't quite understand any concept as to what it was about (no storyline) yet it is called "Tonic"... let your imagination run a bit more next time, and allow for smoother animation & a plot.
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This was done in school as part of an "animation class" the problem being that the teacher had no experience using flash, I really wish this could have been better but thank you for your feedback
The animation was a bit too jumpy and the story was a bit sub par. Perhaps neaten it up a little bit and try not to use as many repeating graphics.
I am sorry I am no better all these years later