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Mar 5, 2012 | 11:14 AM EST

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nothing to spectacular but i need some feedback anyways you think this could be improved please don't hesitate to say :3

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Nojical101Nojical101

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars March 5, 2012

I just don't think I liked it. If it had voice acting and SLIGHTLY better graphics, I would've accepted it.


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BlueStarGeneralBlueStarGeneral

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 5, 2012

I think this deserves more than a 2 star rating, the editing isn't bad, it just seems abit disjointed overall. Maybe having some sort of intro screen or setup scene, would have been cool. I didn't get the merchant thing at the end as I couldn't read the text. Also ripping graphics probably isn't the best way to go as it makes you look cheap. Anyway just my opinion.

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KingDavidKingDavid

Rated 3 / 5 stars March 5, 2012

was very n00bish, line work and character designs and animation all need more work and detail yo



sonicxtremesonicxtreme

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 5, 2012

well you have to work in the fonts there the conversation is barely visible,anyways not bad just need more work.


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DeadCastleDeadCastle

Rated 1 / 5 stars March 5, 2012

I am sure you tried to put a lot of effort into this video but it is horrible. I don't want to sound too rude, but didn't quite understand any concept as to what it was about (no storyline) yet it is called "Tonic"... let your imagination run a bit more next time, and allow for smoother animation & a plot.

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