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This movie is bad, and you should feel bad.
Giving it one star, just in case you purposely made this horrible. I hope to God you did.
Your submission is awful, and may God have mercy on your soul.
I'm only saying this once. I understand that you tried on this animation, but it did turn out to be crap. I hate writing bad reviews for most things, but maybe you can try to use other tools to help you make your animations. I did look at them, and I think I should just use this review on all of them, since this one is your latest. However, I will say one thing about the Grim Rapper animation...please, never again...
Please note I'm not leaving these reviews to be mean, but only to help.
PLEASE stream your audio, it helps a lot. There wasn't a point to this; merely sprite characters interacting with poorly-drawn MS Paint backgrounds. I know that not every flash has to have a point to it, and I could overlook that if this was actually executed in a somewhat-decent manner.
Even for sprites, the animation was bad. It looked like it was done at 6 fps; adjust it to 24 fps. Not to say take a 6 fps movie and just adjust it to 24 but actually add more frames. When you watch a cartoon, study the animation and the reason why the animation looks believable. The timing is in everything.
These backgrounds were really poorly done. Never use the circle tool for anything - pixel art is passable if it's well-drawn, but the spray paint tool used in one of those backgrounds looks horrible. At least erase some of the lines when necessary.
The Mario sprite wasn't even cut out very well, you could clearly see the gray border. What's the deal with the randomness? What is Garfield doing there? Why are there cutouts of random people floating on your canvas?
If you're going to choose such a childish score music for your animation then you could at least go with the original Axel F song instead of Crazy Frog. The live action in this movie was pointless. No point at all, and it lagged at that. Some of the text went by too fast.
"who will win?" you ask. When I watch this, quite frankly I don't know what you're trying to pull off? A sprite fight? A bunch of random scenes strung together? Also, you cutoff at "Garfield wi"
this was entertaining to watch though and i can tell some effort was put into this, so you get 3 stars.
please take this advice into consideration
I'm giving it 5 because of crazy frog.
Lol, not a bad concept. Maybe work a little longer on the backgrounds but cool sprite work. ^^
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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