This is really good
Really cant wait to see what else you come up with, as that one had it all and is making waves in all the right direction and even beyond that, So keep doing what you do. This has some nice visuals and I was very pleased with this as a whole, it was good stuff. It was a pleasent flash, and had some obvious points of improvment, wich i will explain later, but other then that this was not half bad at all, keep up the fantastic work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
To be honest you have outdone yourself here and shown the world of all the talents you have, so no changes needed at this time.
~X~