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A little animation i did for school.
it is awesome game, must play atleast one time.
You could get a lot more out of this idea. Try exploring it a bit further, because you have the skill to make it real.
I really enjoyed it. Loved the twist ending :)
thanks, im glad you enjoyed it!
cute, but not complete, plain, but not bad at all :)
Well, it wasn't so bad, and I've taken into account that you're still probably learning and refining your flash making skills. So I'll give you a few pointers...
While the graphics and movements were surprisingly fluid and better than expected, there was no sense of a chase scene happening at all. It was almost as though the characters were walking, strolling casually, to beat each other up, which can easily bore a potential viewer...the most important thing if you're gonna do an action flash, or any flash actually, is to be able to create MOOD - you were terribly missing that sense of urgency, an adrenalin rush from running, fear, etc, etc. Not only would that make the scene more appealing to the audience but it would also give life to your characters, making your flash all the more enjoyable and entertaining. This mood effect would be easily achieved if you sped up the movements of the characters, just a little.
Apart from that I'm not going to critique the fluidity of your animation or any other technical matters concerning your flash, what I will say is that you've got a lot of potential so keep on working on it and become better :) I was kind of interested that you were also able to give your flash some 3-D depth instead of having it just flat 2-D like most stick flashes are. Oh and that reminds me, it certainly wasn't bad for a stick flash.
Good stuff keep it up, keep in mind the rating is reflective of the current standard of your work. Just keep on working and I'm sure you will produce awesome flashes in the future :)
Thank you for your constructive criticism. I understand that the whole "being chased" atmosphere wasn't really there, it's something i have to work on. Thank you for spending time to write the review though, it does help me out.
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While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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