Being the lord of the underworld and all, won't he get the last laugh on us all anyway?
Author Comments
I made this in les sthan 24 hours for my english class ;A; We had to research a roman/greek god and present information on him. Origionally uploaded as a game because i was in a rush.
heh thats mythology in a nutshell.good job.
I dont know why.. but i like it XD maybe bcuz she have a pretty voice ^^
Well i gotta admit that was a informative speech/movie you made you pretty much summed up the story of the gods in less then 5 mins still it was pretty good although you did make a epic tale kind of less epic lol but still great job if i were to grade you based on this movie i would give you a B+ Great job :)
Good job, has nice momentum. You have a good clear voice, easy to understand.
The piece was informative, you gave a humorous take on the piece but while Pluto ("dwalf" planet) maybe small it was no way pathetic, size doesn't count for everything haha.
The art was nice, you said you made it in 24 hours, which I must say is very good. You could probably benefit from getting a drawing tablet (like a Wacom Bamboo) if you dont have one, and really work on refining your line edges.
As for the fore and backgrounds, they could use some improvement, which I saw you acknowledged in the small text you left around in some scenes. Possible additions could of been subtle background music and/or sound effects. There is plenty free to use music here on Newgrounds, and free sound effects online (though be cautious when downloading from 3rd party sites).
Great work, keep practicing and improving.
A+ (from me anyways)
-TjA