As far as the story line i loved it! Horse runs from an abusive owner. A sfar as the acauly running away part. Every time it jumped i thought it was rinnning on to the grass and back ont he path. It took me ah=while to figure out that it was jumping. the animals porportion was ok but the chicken could have eatent the a freeken cow if it wanted. i think more basis on why the horse jumped would eb good to. liek was he whacking it or whipping it. no it just freeked after two secends and attacked him. I got what you were trying to show in the story line in the beginging (we cna call it a prolouge) but to make it obviouse to others you should have amybe the horses thoughs or a scene where he beats it. It looked liek the horse frreeek out becuase the man was standing there. as funny as it sounds its true and i think yyou should make it nmoe onviouse what is going on. Over all I lvoed the idea and the story line was a wonderfull idea!