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In which our hero, an astro-man, shall be confronted by his automatic nemesis upon the surface of our fair satellite, the Moon.
With out spoling it for everyone else, great punch line. It made me laugh.
great concept, expand it.
I like this, and other works of yours as well.
The style of cinematography in this is great and well timed, if the art is drastically improved, you could fool me into thinking this was real. For a flash animation the art is alright, but keep improving!
The humor was, I admit, a bit dry. I kind of chuckled when the Survivor logo appeared, but that's about it. Also this could use a bit more sound, and future works should be longer, you can't make shorts forever.
I'll be keeping an eye on you... in a good way of course.
Many thanks for the constructive review!
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
If you try eating the Mouse Cleaning Service, you gonna have a bad time...
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