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Feb 1, 2012 | 11:29 PM EST

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Pop-TartPop-Tart

Rated 3 / 5 stars

needs sound but otherwise shows promise



SwordmanofHopeSwordmanofHope

Rated 1 / 5 stars

not much

no sound, some spell errors, but for an early attempt or a rough draft it seems alright. remember, the greatest names are known because they've rewritten and redrawn things hundreds of times to make it just right. you have much more potential, and I hope to see it in the future.


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