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Jan 22, 2012 | 5:56 PM EST

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Random 1rst flash, getting a handle on things.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Ok, random.

If you're going to use scrolling text, it should flow from bottom to top, as English is read from top to bottom.

Otherwise, have it scroll slower if you are trying to be original.


Rated 2 / 5 stars


Your titles need some work, change the size around etc. so that it fits better on the screen. Your art also, while not bad at all, could definitely be improved.

You clearly have some potential here though, keep working at it and you'll be great in no time!


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Not too shabby

not bad for a 1st flash.