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Jan 22, 2012 | 5:56 PM EST

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Random 1rst flash, getting a handle on things.

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VandreKhronosVandreKhronos

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars January 22, 2012

Ok, random.

If you're going to use scrolling text, it should flow from bottom to top, as English is read from top to bottom.

Otherwise, have it scroll slower if you are trying to be original.



NogginmenAnimationsNogginmenAnimations

Rated 2 / 5 stars January 22, 2012

Potential

Your titles need some work, change the size around etc. so that it fits better on the screen. Your art also, while not bad at all, could definitely be improved.

You clearly have some potential here though, keep working at it and you'll be great in no time!



Zirocket-8Zirocket-8

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 22, 2012

Not too shabby

not bad for a 1st flash.