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This is my first submission and my second animation ever. My english isn't good, so you will see alot errors in almost 3 minutes of animation.
The story is a sitcom/parody, is pretty lame, but i worked hard in the animation.
The voice was made using the iSpeech.com
I gave you a 4 because the animation is good, but the voice overs are bad but that can be fixed, and I dont know why but that damn dolphin made me laugh xD. Overall good work.
Awesome! I really liked the art and animation!
Great animation, lacking in sound department
I really enjoyed the animation, you did quite a good job with that. The jokes were funny, especially the kid at the end. I did notice a few areas lacking in the video though, they are:
Sound sometimes seemed off-time, especially with the voices. Sound effects were occasionally too loud and overused.
I really had an issue with the voices. Often I couldn't quite understand them, or they would be muddled with sound effects, making it hard to understand some of the jokes.
Keep up the great animation! Next time, if possible, try to use actual voices for the video :-).
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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