I fixed all the issues that where going on with it. some parts i can't fix because of sprite issues. so. I hope you guys can realize this. well this is the revamped part 1. I hope you guys enjoy this. i really did fix the grammar and spelling. i ran it through everything that has spell checker and grammar checker. everything is hunky dory. hope you all enjoy.
And also, i ran this through all the grammar programs i don't know what more i can do.
I don't fallow what's popular, so i wont be making a digimon pokemon series any time soon, nor will i make a sonic mario anytime soon. not my intrest, anything that's popular every one seems to rip off and bite from. so i don't want that. can't deal with copy cats. inspierers, yes. copies no.